So I forgot the email I used to log into this thing... and my password... so I'll just review like this.

I happened to decide to check back up on this story, because I love it, even though it makes me cry. You have a way with words dear, and when you have time again I would love it if you would write more. As soon as I figure out my password and stuff I'm going to rewrite my fallen angel story, and add more :) probably this summer. I hadn't read this last chapter yet, and it was wonderful. But of course it would be :)

much love

This chapter i really liked. I was drawn into the story and the characters without ever noticing any errors, i simply enjoyed the read. Well done!

*whimper*
thats so sad...
*sniff*
I have to say, i would have reacted the same way jimmy did. pssh. not telling him. tho yeah, understand the bit about not telling, but yeah, rambling. O.o i like the update hun, and i love the story, we gotta hang out sometime soon, i miss yas. how bout when yer done with school you come over and stay over for a bit. it'll be fun. much love.

hmm, interesting, it seems forced, the force at the end is good, i think you finally settled into your comfort zone by the end after being away so long, but some of it seems forced, a lot of plot revealed in a short amount of words.

Loved this chapter. It had a sort of calming rhythm to it...
I'm off to get some sleep. Write more!

Yeah, i went back and read the alst few lines of the last chapter this time. Just a seggestion, but you seem to have a lot of little side comments and other little random sentences that one person might call personality and another would call a break in the flow. Brief but good chapter, keep up the good work.

Godses! Wisk8r wantses more, yess! ^_^

pretty well done, im lost because it's been so long since you've posted and im too tired to go back and read the others. its good though.

Aww, cute! Can't wait for the resolution!

Very good (both chapters 6 and 7)! The fight between Ryan and Jack was so cute, in an odd way. Please update soon. I hope you did well on your exams!

'...and two little girls to make happy.'
Am I the only one who's internal voice screams - "NO! Pedophilic tendencies are bad!"
*cough* whee! pool!

it seemed a little rushed, im not saying the quality was poor, but things move really quickly. The moments where he was avoiding talking about hte pills could have been stretched out since it might have seemed eternally long to hte character himself.
the plot is still coming along nicely and im looking forward to hearing more, but on your time, dont rush it.
i have a question. do you play pool?

a bit choppier than your last chapter. im still interested, but often find myself lost.

Wow, that was a good chapter. I read straight through it without thinking of anything i would change or haveing to read something over cause it was akward.
Well i see the plot thickens. Poor Ryan. anyways, im looking forward to more, you have effectively sucked me in. This has been added to my favorite stories list.

::gasps:: Wow, that last sentence totally got me... Holy crap... I would say I hope everything's all right, but that's just a bit impossible... Update soon, I lurve it!