Brilliant. :D

I love it!

Yummy...sex...XD
O.o...sorry, youko side talkin' ^^;;
Fun fun...likey it much. Very beyond the title of "innuendo" haha. The more blatantness, the better, I say!
...now, too bad iono how far you can go with lemons at ff.net...X.x;;
~ Kit ~

Though this is highly inappropriate I think you have a very good talent just waiting to be let out. Unfortunately your talent is obviously not in songwriting. In fact it has nothing to do with music. I think that maybe toilet cleaning is more appropriate.

*smiles* I like this, pleased to see something other than sappy lovey duffy stuff making sex romantic. The casual and blunt nature of your poem is most appealing.
L.

Reminded me alot of David Bowie. I love it!

*grins* te he he everyone has their own little sexual secrets, including me *MWA HA HA HA* LOL no anyway it's a very straight forward song, I usually don't enjoy stuff like this but it's actually pretty good. I like the last line "spread your legs and stay awhile" he he, maybe because I'm a sex fiend.. maybe? Who knows *shrugs* lol I like it my dear, very nice.
*Jenna*

oh!! this has been so me lately... too bad my boyfriend's in seattle at the moment... horray for phone sex! XX... god... when he gets here we're gonna be ** rabbits... uhm.. anyways!
Great poem... very imaginative... very sexy... heh I love it! =P
Tokiko
Thanks for the reviews.. glad you liked my poems.. =D I got more necro poems if you wanna read more, lol xx

HAHA!
YEAH YOU POSTED IT!
muHAH!!
yipe...
... _ _l
loverly poem...
KEEP POSTING
or
else...
jk
well, awesome job, keep it up(lol)!
babai~_~
C_C...
-keisi