| Reviews for Dance of the World |
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Aslan Israel 1/29/05 . chapter 1Lighthearted and happy. Great job. |
ROMAN EMPEROR 4/8/04 . chapter 1It sounds as if this person makes your world worth living , making "butterflies dance" and the "sun shines bright". Without this person your heart stays in the it is love , you just dont know it yet , your heart does. |
the insane floo pot 3/7/04 . chapter 1I know what you mean... I've got truoble pining it down to a specific interpretation but I think that it could be about love *sigh* well that' only becasue I have a one track mind... but it makes a change thinking about love in a happy sense! I really, really like this poem but... just like the meaning of it I can't put it down to one thing... I mean the imagery structure and stlye all help make it to be totally amazing! I LOVE though how you've weaved in natural imagery throughout... "Lightning flashes and rainbows form" *sigh* lightening and rainbows... both contrast eachother perfectly, lightning passionate and ranibows hopeful! And that's just one example I find loads more in this brilliant poem of yours! Oh wait I can think of one word that sums everything about this poem: PERFECT! Completley and utterly perfect... it really is and definitly one of my fave poems now _ |
Crucified Sanctity 12/13/03 . chapter 1Pretty :) I like love poems. They make me go all gooey and turn to romantic jam. Now I miss my girl :( - Crucified Sanctity - |
Victor Soulstorm 12/12/03 . chapter 1I'd say its about everlasting love, that not even mother nature can tear apart. |