hey hey ty!...this is great too...you need to enter this into the contest and guess what!...I already have my stuff entered, so I guess i can't enter "I tried"...sorry, but there is always next year. Keep writing!-KS

wow that's so pretty and sweet =) i love it

So pretty...*Sigh*. There was one thing, the line "Mind not my fingers the brush your hair", did you mean "Mind not the fingers THAT brush your hair?" Other than that, perfect rythm, perfect meter, perfect everything. Beautiful. ^_^

Love it, excellent work.

Aw! That is so cute.

Wow! Another great one! I love it, TH!
Me.

*happy sniff* I love you too.

I am speechless...it's beautiful. I hope you are proud of the image you have painted because it is a masterpeice.