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| CJ Jazzy 2004-08-17 ch 1, | Wow |
| alwayscold 2003-12-12 ch 1, | I GET IT! i had to read it again after you told me about it. You and him both tried to sommit suicide. Okay I read it wrong. And you're not sure because he did. I totally misread it. So now i like it alot. Yay! Good job! AC |
| simpleplan13 2003-12-12 ch 1, | wow... very interested concept.. sad, but well-written & powerful.. i love it... thanks for all your wonderful reviews |
| flowerthief 2003-12-12 ch 1, | I remember this weekend I had tried to kill myself. And this weekend he tried to kill himself. Hm...Did you just mess up? Well I'm confused about this one. I don't know Good AC |
| Chambered emotions 2003-12-11 ch 1, | when someone dies, we always questions our actions or ways of thinking...I know I have...My friend died of an overdose last year and I always asked myself questions...could I have helped her out?? Could I have done something to stop this? No matter what, in the end, you can't blame yourself for the mistakes that you made while they were alive because you can't see the future...you can't see your fate or someone elses. You can't see who is going to die young and who isnt. Don't drown your mind with regrets is all I'm saying...Wonderfully written poem...keep up the good work! |