O.o...so good. Your repetition is perfect to the dot.

Amen! This is one of my favorites of your poems so far. Truly, God is the only one that could every be perfect for anyone. Another marvelous piece.
~*~AbunaiChikara

I love the way you made Christ out to be the picture perfect lover (which He is!). The deep, evocative language is one that might be expressed to your spouse, yet it is so appropriate, isn't it? The repetition in the final lines of each stanza is brilliantly used. Wow... I really like this one!

Amen! This was so true and you wrote it in such a powerful fashion. Excellent.
~Heart of the Sword

the language which you use is exquisite!! I love how rich this piece is, and it is also so powerful in what all the awesome words mean put together. I like it a lot... He indeed is a picture perfect King.
write on!!

That's good. Yeah, that's basically all I have to say. No mistakes...

Beautiful! This is so rich in language ... thought that's nothing new with you, huh? ;-) but still... really well done