Yes, I'm re-reviewing this piece. I read it again and got a huge lump in my throat because it's just so amazingly well conveyed. The way you described "this dull gray form of emotion" is the most striking line, and GOD it's just an amazing poem. I really can't praise you enough for putting this feeling to paper so accurately. Seriously, this is amazing.

Very beautiful- amazing. Very passionate and desperate. It's really a powerful poem. I just don't know what else to say...

Oh nice. I love peoms like this.
*Allison
Review for me and I'll review for you.

Im confused, I thought I read this or read somethin close to this. But neway, nice poem here, kiked it a lot. Very nicely written. Keep writing!
If u can, plz r and r some of my work too, it will mean a lot to me.
Thanks!