Great poem, I really liked this one. The last stanza was especially good, beautifully written. Keep it up!
~Lsay312

I really like this poem. I especially like the line, "You wanted tourism, my emotions the sights to see." There's a lot of emotion in it and your word usage is superb.
~Exagerration~
P.s. Thanks for all your reviews :)

oh wow, your wording on this poem is really awesome. I am getting used to your endings and now that I have read several of your poems they are starting to work in my head when I read. Continue w/ the good work.

Hey! It's Ashley. Please regard this as an overall review for all of your poems [I have read them all].
I am so jealous. :( I haven't written a decent story in such a long time. I used to write poetry a lot too... nothing as good as this, of course. Maybe I should start that again. We can be poetry buddies! lol jk
Keep doing a great job. You're amazing.

wow gurl, that was so good. u really have a gift for this. wow. that is seriously all i have to say. wow wow wow wow wow
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*lyz

AWESOME! i love you!! lol...you used the word "savvy"! sweet! pirates rock!! i know you said you like my poems, but this blows mine out of the water...great descriptions! you are incredible! :)!

u and him have been 2gether 2 long to fight like this...but he needs 2 apologize or sumthin luv me

Riley's such a bastard.