oohh...i so understand this...the synopsis is like exactly what i'm going through!

I'm sorry but I gotta be brutally honest. I don't think it's completely me, but maybe it is. In the flashback I got completely lost. It's the speakin I don't completely know everytime who is exactly speakin. I do believe that you don't have to always put who is really speakin, like sometimes it's better to imply who is. but I don't thnk you're properly implyin who's speakin. and that kinda threw me off, so now I'm completly out of the story instead of finishin it, I'm writin the review already, which I feel bad about. I thnk the problem is that there's one too many names, and you haven't introduced each character properly so I can remember who this person is, or recognize the name. what ruki, Mi-chan, shikari? huh? (Maybe cuz I'm not as big of an anime lover, but still anime haters should be able to step into the story and be able to read it, otherwise how can you get new readers?)
and one more thing, I don't like stereotypes (the popular boy that everybody loves, cuz he's so cute and such a badass, too overly played, the geeky girl that loves the popular boy, freakin Molly Ringwald) I there are plenty of girls that will never be popular even though they look hot. There are girls that are popular and don't even look like Britney Spears (cuz she's so hot ::rolls his eyes::). try playin off, seperate new ideas of characters beyond the already documented blueprint (stereotypin). But I like that he took (swiped) her journal, that was a good detail. And kinda gives the story like a future, if you have one intended then I'd say I'd like to read it, but then again I'd just get lost...

Update soon. This is really good. I want to find out what is going to happen with her at school. Thanks.

Ne, see how many more reviews you get when you don't make people sign in? It's already working. ^^; Well, cool story so far! I'm enjoying this, I already feel sorry for the main character. Please write more soon! And UPDATE your other stories!