Reviews for Blind But Not Unheard

Reviews For: Blind But Not Unheard

Yuki Myco 2005-11-01 ch 1,	abuseThis isn't a bad story, but it's also not quite as good as the Mystic Water story... Well for one this story has some spelling errors. Like, "As she lie there," The word lie should be replaced with something like lied or laid. There are a few other instances (like one or two) with the same mistake. Although I will say that having each paragraph switch between the two people is a nice touch. It looks like at first that each chapter doesn't flor with the next, when in the end it really did flow well. It was also a good call to give each character names. It helps to personify and humanize them by doing so. So I can only commend you for doing that. A short story with a nice twist. I've pretty much covered all the bad, the rest is good. Good word choice, and good description for the length.
Jon Blue 2004-05-24 ch 1,	abuseI'm glad I stayed to read this...I'm like you now ::buries his head shame::, I don't know what to say for this. Awesomay! Except I thnk that this story could so be expanded even more. It's a bad story, and you have a remarkable story-tellin ability. I'm jealous!! And thaz sayin much (cuz usually I'm all arrogant) Well this was bad, kept my attention, which is a very complicated thing to do. So two big ups to you. Well, I'd say three (err, you know, but this isn't Cef) lol.
Songwind 2003-12-20 ch 1, anon.	abuseNe, I haven't read this yet? smacks herself Bad Songwind! Bad! This is a really good beginning, y'know? And since we get two weeks off from school, I WILL be expecting you to update, don'cha know... And soon, too! ...Please?

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