 Ivriniel 2005-01-03 . chapter 1I know this feeling...very sad..Nice poem. |
 Dracula, Lord of the Vampires 2004-03-12 . chapter 1I love this. I was bullied years ago, but it wasn't as severe as in this poem.
P.S Please review my other stuff. |
 Karin Gordon 2004-01-07 . chapter 1It reminds me of when I was in gr 6 I used to get bullied alot. Nice rhymes. |
 KaseyLovesNoOne 2003-12-29 . chapter 1If they want to make friends,
then bullying’s not the case
can’t they see the tears rolling down my face?
I absolutly adore that part! Thank you for sharing it!:) Keep it up! |
 no 1 special 2003-12-28 . chapter 1its a nice poem. i like how you used strong words in your descriptoin on what the bullies did/do. good job :)
~no 1 special |
 aode 2003-12-28 . chapter 1short, but good nonetheless |
 Children of the Root 2003-12-12 . chapter 1ah, i know the feeling. Sometimes, it seems people don't care if they bully other people and hurt their feelings. It ** me off.
Good work! |