but watch and wait,

to see our friends,

in heaps of piled bait.

why bait? bait is to try and catch something like a disease, not destroy something like a diesease. You shudnt rhym for the sake of it. it has to make sense.

Wow, rather graphic the last part... but I liked it... the only problem is now I won't be able to eat for a week. LOL.

This was a powerful piece.
~Heart of the Sword

Good poem. I thoght about it that way at the time too.