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| For What Its Worth 2007-07-21 ch 1, | abuseHmm...I like it. But there is something slightly off about the wording...It isn't in the same age. The words don't...fit. Part of it is eloquent, and slightly formal, the other part is...more modern. And yes, this is indicative of my disrespect in regards to modern speaking. |
| Blissfully Unaware 2004-04-01 ch 1, | abuseAw...very sad, but I like the style and the words that you used. So, in a nutshell, I liked it. ^_^ |
| Siberia1 2003-12-15 ch 1, | abuse*claps hands* Oh, the words flow wonderfully together, while your feelings of isolation seeps beautfully through each verse. I can totally relate to this poem; I guess we both understand love well enough to know it can never belong to us. Bravo! :) |
| LegendaryPunk29 2003-12-12 ch 1, | abuseWow, very nicely written, heart touching, nice formatted organized poem! I really liked it a lot. Very nice work here, Keep writing! If u can, plz r and r some of my work too, it will mean a lot to me! Thanks! |