 Infinite Smiles 2003-12-23 . chapter 1I love it. Love it. Love it. Very powerful. I love the language and the concept. I usually copy and paste my favorite part into the review, but.. I would have to copy and paste the whole thing. Brilliant work. |
 Sarah Parker 2003-12-21 . chapter 1Aw, I like this one alot too... I don't know what it is about this one that touched me.. I just really liked it. I love your word choice. The imagery's really good. It's just a very heartfelt poem... and I love that it points out that opposite's DO attract and that it IS possible to love and be best friends with someone completely different from you... hmmph. Stupid people. Anyway, great poem!! |
 ionlyliveindreams 2003-12-20 . chapter 1Heh, interesting terminology you used here... I like it! I like the third verse. Very cool, and I didn't really find any problems. I also like the rhyme and it doesn't sound forced, so kudos to you! Good job.
Keep writing
~ionlyliveindreams |
 Seeker of the Way 2003-12-17 . chapter 1You KNOW I dig it!
I especially love the last four lines.
last five lines.
last six -- oh to hell with it, it is all cool!!
You really have no idea how close we are to being twins, do you?
I may have to write something inspired from this, no promises, tho! You readers know it cannot top this work of art!
Yeah RSK! |
 Bitch Du Jour 2003-12-15 . chapter 1This is a really great set of poems. I really enjoyed reading it.
Front row, center, when Satan screams,
I pencil in your deepest dreams.
That was my favorite part. It was like reaching the apex of a horror film. Great job. |
 McKenzie Drestire 2003-12-15 . chapter 1Oh my god, this was just, beautiful, it was so, descriptive, i was, choked, the last line is like everyfriend you've ever had telling you it's okay that they ** you over, the images, the attention to detail, wow, the scheme too, with the heavy description then the simple points inbetween. who the hell is this, it's like you're ** off, but you forgive this person, maybe i'm looking too much into it, but hell, keep this up my friend, i LOVE this.
Kenzie
PS - Thanks for the E-mails over the weekend, i'll send one later, keep on the lookout.
Peace |
 LegendaryPunk29 2003-12-12 . chapter 1It was ok, not a fave poem of a day, but I guess I liked it. Nice poem. nice, nice Keep writing and ull get betta!
If u can, plz r and r some of my work too, it will mean a lot to me!
Thanks! |
 Timberly Rey 2003-12-12 . chapter 1wow. very nice. I really like your rhyme scheme. if you have time, please r/r my work. thanks bunches!! --timberly |
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