You copied Talos from the Forgotten Realms saga! What's wrong with you! Can't you come up with a name even if your life depended on it! Damn plagurisers!

Finally a note that u deserved!
Wicked story reminds me a bit of Jess's story! HA! Girls can kick butt too! Good job, it makes u want ot keep on reading till its all over! Good Job, once again!
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U know who

Awesome, awesome story Chibi! I loved it, no wonder you got such a good mark! The way you wrote it, your descriptions, everything was perfect.
I think it would be interesting if you wrote more stories about Echo and/or the country of Lithium. Just a thought, but it'd be cool.
Once again, awesome job! =D

I too found this pretty fascinating. You did a great job with the descriptions and last part was pretty touching *sniffle*. Perhaps consider posting up this story except expanding it to be more chapters. Or soemthing like that. The story seems pretty promising. Great job and keep on writing! Laterz
PS: R/R 1:3 Rectangular Prism when you have the time plz. Thanks! :)

i did like this story, but i do have a comment and its that if talos is so damn powerful, dont u think it would take a little longer than being stabbed once 2 kill him? anyways, i did think it was a good story all the same. interesting name 4 the kingdom.