i hate you -_-...HOW DARE YOU KILL THEM! T.T aw, i'm all sad now. it wuz a good story though

You killed them! Evil! I love it! Beautiful story of perfect love...I'm so sad...I almost cried. Very well written.

I cried through the whole chapter. Amazing story and an ending well suited to it. I wish they would have lived, but it wouldn't have made the story like the deaths did.

I Love this story!! I'm crying now! Great job!! TTFN! ;)

ah!! what are you doing. You should totally go on with the story. Dont end it with them dieing. :(. I love it. It inspires me beyond belief.

Hm...*thinks* I must say...I liked the ending of chapter 24 ^_~. But the big disappointment: Your characters actions are so stereotypical and predictable. *gets stabbed to death* I've already told you a lot about how I think about it. I'm not sure what my opinion about the whole story is though. *chu*

Very heart-warming story, I found the characters were easy to fall for and it difficult to walk away without reading another chapter. You accomplished having the readers drawn not only to the characters but keeping them captivated chapter after chapter.

The ending was unexpected, not your usual Fairy Tale ending. Though I'm sure I'm not alone that I would have prefered to see the boys live happily together in their new home, I also believe that any other ending would not have suited it.Well done. =>

Is that 100 words? >_>

omg! *wails* noo!! crying here! beautiful story though, jst.. wow, brilliant. *sniff* powerfully done, go you!

The death was an interesting twist at the end... That's so sad, it made me cry all through the end of the last chapter...

I really like it so far and I'm planning on finishing it soon. I hope you've written other stories cause I want' to read them all.

Oh my gosh! I didn't think you were serious when you said you were gonig to kill Dave and Adrian off (in one of the chappies you said that)! I positively loved it! Great job!

Amazing. Few typing errors but that's to be expected.. understood.

I get a little confused with who's doing and saying what at times...But overall it's great!

And umm..i'm just too lazy to sign in at the moment. hehe.

I have a friend who drums. This is pretty realistic in the fac that there are hours he can drum between but can't before or after them.

OMIGOD!! you evil creature, that is so sad! (don't take this the wrong way, i call everyone evil. It's a really good story.)

This is an amazing story. You write well and the story was amazingly crafted. If anything, I would say that sometimes it was difficult to understand who was the "he" or "she" that was doing something. Especially just after someone else has talked. Also Dave shouldn't have killed himself, but thats just my opinion. Well Done.