I liked it. I usually write free verse, but I like rhyming poetry so much more... I just don't have enough creativity to write 'em. Hehe.
Just one thing. The phrase "spread my wings" is used a lot. No need to elaborate. ^_^; You're not one of those annoying inexperienced writers... Ah, but this was a lot better then what I could do (I've written what, two or three poems?) and I probably shouldn't be talkng. =P
But, yup, I liked. =)
--Anikki