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Heatless Flame 2006-01-17 . chapter 1
Ah! That was SUCH a dramatic moment, one spirit,(or Erfea). Please update as soon as possible. Also, check out my story, Everlasting Battle.
Munnock 2003-12-29 . chapter 1
THis is good for a start. You also said that you were looking for some idea's right? Well, I have some. To continue the story you could find some of your favorite movies. Pick things from them, add them all up, add speacking, and you have a story. That is what I do to some of my storys. It is quiet fun and easy. Or you could make up places like I did in my latest story, Kya's Journey. I made all of it up. But if you ask me you should be the one makeing and thinking of your storys and how to write them. lol
Lilly Of the Wolves 2003-12-17 . chapter 1
i like it!! well done! do u have AIM, per chance? if so id love to chat with a fellow writer!
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