Ah! That was SUCH a dramatic moment, one spirit,(or Erfea). Please update as soon as possible. Also, check out my story, Everlasting Battle.

THis is good for a start. You also said that you were looking for some idea's right? Well, I have some. To continue the story you could find some of your favorite movies. Pick things from them, add them all up, add speacking, and you have a story. That is what I do to some of my storys. It is quiet fun and easy. Or you could make up places like I did in my latest story, Kya's Journey. I made all of it up. But if you ask me you should be the one makeing and thinking of your storys and how to write them. lol

i like it!! well done! do u have AIM, per chance? if so id love to chat with a fellow writer!