Awwh. So sad. ;;-;; The eye description was my favorite. "Previously filled with life...now dead...filled with black." I got a great image from that. ^-^ You reviewed one of my works long long ago. Destiny, I think; and just now am I returning the favor. Sorry for the delay. ::bows head shamefully:: Laziness took me over. ;;-;; But, I'm back; and I shall be writing and adding to my gallary more often. ^-^ Feel free to check more of it out. ^-^ I know I will your own. And Diana is a pretty name, I gotta say. Beautiful. ^-^ Well, I'm out. Keep writing, sweetie! ^-^ ~*~SQ~*~

i think the last line would be improved with the "too" before the "when". but apart from that its really good

I love the descriptions of the eyes... This is so depressing but in a kinda uplifting way- I don't think that makes any sense but at least I know what I'm talking about... I guess I mean that it's a good thing to see that you're getting yourslef together enough to put pen to paper and make something productive and beautiful out of it.