 creux-mikomi 2005-05-17 . chapter 3WHEE! Alright! i'm giving you a review. get your lazy ** up and write a chapter! LOL :D |
 TheMasterKrix 2004-05-23 . chapter 1 Kris Here...Whoo, finally, i get to read something of yours. This is very good. |
 GataFairy 2003-12-26 . chapter 3You... stole my smiley. But I love Kyle, so I'm letting it slide. XP And now for the actual review section of this... review.
There's really a sense of a dry, barren, desert-like area here. Quite frankly, I hate that kind of place. So by indirectly making me hate the scenery, I can focus on the characters. The setting is also quite realistic when you think about it -- big sun MUST equal much drought. So yeah. Keep it up. Beta-read your stuff or let me do it. XP Mr. Anderson. |
 OtakuSailorV 2003-12-13 . chapter 3Hey, me again. ^_^ I tried to review but it said that you didn't take anonymous reviews. So, here I am, loggec in & typing a reivew which I have no idea why I'm telling you this. BTW, good job again & keep it up. This is interesting. |
 Shadeofwhite 2003-12-13 . chapter 2Very interesting... A unique twist on the usual post-Armageddon scene... I expect great things and frequent updates on this story. |
 OtakuSailorV 2003-12-12 . chapter 2Woah! That's some cool stuff you came up with. You must have been thinking forever about how to make all the time & date things up. It's really cool. I like it alot. Please make more soon. ^_^ See ya then! |