this one is really really good. and its so true too about how people are so judgemental.. that is what you were going for, right?

sad...I feel the same sometimes. Very good, keep up the good work. ^_~

Nice job on capturing the emotion. i know exactly how u feel. (check out come of my poetry and you'll see what i mean)You really made me feel like i was going through(again)what you seem to be. Hats off to You!