Oh my gosh! I loved your story so much! I waited till I finished reading this story to review, and i think it was an amzing story with lots of imagination and true love! I hope I can be also one of your loyal fans? ;)

really really really good. I think if you made the story longer it would make quite a good novel

WHE! What a great ending! *SQUEAL*

Oh, YAY! Kissess all around! _ Oh, but I wish you were a bit fluffier, like in your fanfic. -_-;; Oh well...
Hey, you write yuri? ... Not my best tastes... at all... but that's okay, you go and have fun with that. :) Hey, write an epilogue- y'know?
... or a sequel. Sequels are good. - WRITE A SEQUEL! PLEASE? ;_;
I sprained my ankle... oh well... not important...
Say, I'll take you up on that offer on writing a story together some time, kay? -
Later and much luck!
J.M. Seeley

The adventure's almost over, and it saddens me greatly... once the last chapter is written and posted, I will... oh WAH! ;_; Well, just please continue! And Nersa better kiss Evan! KISS HIM DAMNIT! ROMANCE MUST FLOW! -
J.M. Seeley
P.S.: I'm happy to be your reviewer, even if it means I'm the only one who reads it. - Much luck!

Wow, now that's intriguing. Your gods are pretty cool! :) Say, you're working on a fanfic? COOL! I'll check it out. ;) Oh, and please update! This is one of the best EVER!
J.M. Seeley

Ack, resistance. Again, damn you Nersa! But I agree with Evan's little voice, what is duty when you don't even believe in the cause?
Oh yay! You dedicated this to me? :) Happy... WE! ... O.o Uh... whoops, my fangirlish side wishes freedom... heeheehee... yeah. -_-
CONTINUE! You HAVE to! If you don't... oh, the tears that I will spill and drown this miserable world within my sorrows... le sigh...
Okay, ebough Shakespear-ish quote-e-ness. Just continue, please!
J.M. Seeley

ACK! NO! Damn you Nersa, got to Evan! Got to Evan!
O.o Uh... whoops? Heh, sorry, but this is gonna drive me up the wall for awhile. -;; Heh...
But please, do keep it up! I want to know what happens next!
J.M. Seeley

Hm... Now, we're getting somewhere! Have to admit it, this is getting real good. I like it, alot. -
As promised, though, I'm working on an original story. The chapter should be up soon, I'm still working out the kinks.
But said above is not the point, I REALLY like your story, you simply MUST continue! - If not... well, I must weep and wonder always of what would happen to Evan and Nersa- speaking of whom, you've gotta slip in some romance, and soon. I know Nersa's all caught up in Erinias... does he really love her? Or does he love Evan? Oh, I pray it's Evan! - Shounan ai/yaoi/ b-love rocks! WAHOO!
O.o whoopsie, fan girl's slippin' through. Well, I gotta go, later! -
J.M. Seeley

I like this so far. One thing, though: It seems more like it would fit under sci-fi. Only complaint I have so far.

interesting. hurry with it. )

pretty good. cant wait to read your next chapter. )

Ah, and Shai is to be sacrificed? Hm... Helios sounds mighty interesting. You simply HAVE to continue. If you dont't... well, I don't know what I'd do!
Please, I'm curious to what happens next.:)
J.M. Seeley

OMG! That was a bit different than what you first had in mind. Can't wait to see what happens next!

Hey! Great story, great characters! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Sarah