One word:
Incredible.
-Grant19-

Another one...
Captivating and heartwrenchingly beautiful. You could just see and Feel that love between them. I loved the ending, how they're still together even in death. My favorite parts were the slanted stanzas though. Brilliant, awesome write.

wow, this was so beautiful...the love and the romance which emantated from ever corner of this poem was so strong, so emphasising of the power of love.
such a lovely story, heart breaking in its loss, but at the same time joyful in the love which IS shown.
i think im loss for words, i think you know how good this poem is, i dont see how you couldnt, the talent that was put into it is stark...so obvious, and well used...so i think anything i say will be quite cliche. fantastic work here, amazing, kudos!

That is absolutely beautiful. You string the words together so well and create such images...its wonderful.
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wOw. That's simply amazing. I loved how you format it for a greater impact. But wow. I can't help but be left in awe. You are a master of words! Keep up the awesome work!!

You're such an awsome poet! You should seriously consider sending your work in for publication.