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Reviews For: Element of Fate
Isis ShadowWolf 2005-08-02 . chapter 1
Oh my goddess, you just voiced in that poem a question I've had for a long, long time.

This poem was beautifully, intelligently written, and props for the interesting format.
karmakaze 2003-12-24 . chapter 1
This is so beautiful, how you used the phrases in a way that it flowed without rhyming. I also thought the message of the soulmates reunited was interesting.
I'm really sorry, but I'm not allowed to e-mail people I meet online. That's why my address isn't there. I know, it sucks.
I do have a neopets, bookrags, and N account, but I don't know if that really counts as anything.
Sorry to say.
Still, your writing is very interesting:D
Keep it up!
aulliana 2003-12-15 . chapter 1
I liked the form. Also, "Love, more powerful than Goddesses," is a wonderful line. (Just in case you needed me to assure you of that...) The entire piece is very beautiful--and very true. Blessed be!
Christine Persephone 2003-12-14 . chapter 1
Well, that's thoroughly depressing.
And it's easy enough for you to turn your back on Them. You're Chaotic. I couldn't, ever. All I've got to cling to is trust and faith in a few shaky promises made a long time ago.
Dan 2003-12-13 . chapter 1
Interesting use of form, good images, good word choice.
Depressing subject -- over all I like
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