|Reviews for Pretend|
| MagenDavid 6/7/04 . chapter 1
My sister is like that. When you grow up with 4 siblings you learn how to hide what your feeling so as not to give them the satisfaction of knowing they hurt you.
You truly truly did an inconcievably amazing job!
| XxCleverfool 6/3/04 . chapter 1
I love angst. You write it so well. It's angsty, but not enough where it's overly dramatic.
| anthr-gift-4m-hvn 3/20/04 . chapter 1
wow! great rhyming! i really like this one. i'm gonna add it to my fav. thanx for the review.
like i said, i like the way this one flows well and i can relate to it. hiding the way i truly am at times. i'm learning to just be myself though and my Lord has helped me to over come every pain that comes along, even the ones that will leave lifelone scars. great piece though!
| simpleplan13 12/21/03 . chapter 1
wow that perfectly describes my friend.. cool poem
| Etheral 12/15/03 . chapter 1
Whoa. I can so relate to this! Well-written! Great job!
| Flotom 12/13/03 . chapter 1
this is really good. it's also true.
| OtakuSailorV 12/13/03 . chapter 1
oh I really like this! I feel this way sometimes too! This is great! Keep up the good work! _ bye now!
| Chaotic Ellipsis 12/13/03 . chapter 1
Heh.. I really like this poem, wether it's because it's well written, or because it's how I feel on a daily basis... *shrugs* either way, it was very well done. *thumbs up* Thank you for it -Chaotic Ellipsis