It's a little like a haiku--short and poignant. I like the phrase "apricot skin" best. It's a cute poem.
May the Muse be with you!
--Museworks

plain, simple yet effective. dunno if it was supposed to be like what i think it is (i'm probably just mis-interepriting it) but i felt that though the tears only trickle silently, the bit eith the waterfall at the end waterfall makes the sorrow seem huge. if you get my meaning...
nice. keep it up, please R&R mine,
Sarpedon x

Good, I like it. ^_^ Good job.

This is so very beautiful, you capture so much essence in such few words!
Pease could you read some of my work and give me some honest reviews?
Thank you Sincerely Maria