*moves fingers around, trying to think* ah, hell, it's 11:31...I can't think.

Great job! Funny XD

I want that burger. My life's not interesting enough.

Good job. Come back to writing sometime.

Hm, either this guy's remembering his life out of order, or he's schizophrenic and this is his, erm, well, one of his lesser active personalities?
My head hurts now...

I love the randomness! It appears as if the character is someone becoming a bunch of different people right as they are about to die? Hmm..becoming or just piggy-backing in their bodies. What on earth was in that burger?

And I thought you couldn't get any more random. Proved me wrong...

Hm...Odd, but interesting. Kinda Matrix-y in that "there's a deeper meaning but nobody gets it" kinda way.

lol, it sounds alot like kitty/gir...BECAUSE SHES SHORT! bwhahahahahahahahahahahahaha...*puts on helmet* .(o__o). meep

Well that was strange, but very good! Well written.

Oh my! This was hilarious. I like how it jumped to random parts. I wonder if there really is something behind this. Anyway, I'm favoriting this one! :D

Interesting. Didn't really understand it (well okay not at all then) but it was enjoyable anyway :o)

Make's no sense to me... realy it doesn't... amusing though...
YOU WILL NEVER FIND OUT WHAT THE M. STANDS FOR!
Millie: well... he will if i tell him
Me: You wouldn't dare!
Millie: it stands for Mor... *is head in the head with a pen* What the hell was that for?
Me: For you to write your next chapter with
Millie: I get to write it!! *eyes sparkle*
Me: Yes, and you can kill whomever you want to in it. I'm, working with Lain and Lance.
Millie: YES! Oh and it stands for Morgan *runs off giggling*
Me: *Glare* I CAN CANCEL YOUR STORY YOU KNOW

Lol. That was really funny.
I didn't understand it, but I think it was good. I like stories like this; they make no sense, but keep you entertained.
Lol. Keep up the good work.
~Da-c0nfu53d-1