this was lovely, so tender, exquistite, i really liked. kudos!

That's lovely darling :) Very short but I like how it's easily put together to cause such an emotional effect within the poem. Very sweet.
*Jenna*
ps - exactly 7 days ONE WEEK 'til Kerri's here *DANCES* just thought I'd point that out. He he he.

Hiya! I like this :D! It's so short and simple...cute! I think simplicity is great...write more! Love, mia

i dont like awesome i dunno that word just doesnt seem to fit, but of course i love hte format & its a cool poem... i can relate

Lovely little bit. *sigh* I really feel this way too. Oh sweet longing! ^_^ I'm sure many others too can relate.
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Jess 0:o)