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| Shadow of Silver 2005-04-05 ch 1,   | I like this poem. You should try different rhyming patterns, though. Nice compiliation. [~Shadow of Silver~] |
| Switchboard 2005-03-30 ch 1, | Dude...I'm speechless...And anyone who knows me know that is REALY hard to do... |
| Cry Tears of Darkness 2005-03-26 ch 1, | i like this a lot. nicely put and well crafted. |
| Siberian-Tigress 2005-03-16 ch 1, | Whoa. This beautiful. I can really sense the person behind the poem. |
| Thyrt 2005-03-03 ch 1, | i always feel strangely calm during storms..i don't know why, but i just do, i guess rain has a calming effect on me..good job! |
| LilyDarkwater 2005-02-19 ch 1, | Wow, now before i must go I have to complement you on puting the feeling of great emotion into your writing. It makes it all the much more worth to read. as goes for ur otehr poems i didnt reveiw but read.~the lynster |
| KIFFRYN 2005-02-16 ch 1, | real well written well done! |
| Charisma101 2005-02-12 ch 1, | one of my favs of your stuff.. tho i think u meant to write again with agin. lol no harm done:P |
| hiding behind amber eyes 2005-01-22 ch 1, | I really liked this poem, i love thunder storms! this was great cuz it made feel like i was there. keep up the awesome writing! |
| Saeger 2005-01-16 ch 1, | That is cool. I love the imagery, I can literaly see the storm starting, and carrying on... I like it, especially the lines " A great roar feels my ears I realize my deepest fears."That is great. |
| Minus the Bear 2005-01-12 ch 1, | God poem! Nicely written and the last lines were really good. |
| Samantha A. Simon 2005-01-08 ch 1, | It s very descriptive and makes the reader believe that they are in the middle of the storm. |
| Gemema 2003-12-21 ch 1, | Another great poem. I love storms, and this poem captures the nature of a storm quite well. Great job! |
| aconsciousjulia 2003-12-21 ch 1, | this is amazing...beautiful, lovely imagry...i love it...and perhaps it is because i am partial to thunderstorms, but yet i love this, tis beautiful |
| Diva Chiba 2003-12-21 ch 1, | Firstly, thanks for reviewing my poem! K, I liked the vivid descriptions you used in this piece. They gave great insight into what you were feeling. Nice work! ~Diva Chiba |