Nice work... like a lot of your stories and poems 'blood' is a common feature. You were wrong about one thing though (I hope). Behind this dominant reading of gore and violence, cleverly disguised might I add, is the true cultural attitudes, values and beliefs that you posses.

This poem is ** awesome! One of my favorite of your works. I absolutely love it.

I absolutely love this. The internal and off rhyme is utter bliss.

The end kind of disappointed me, frankly. I was getting all eager about killing people through cannibalism...Call me sick. But you'll always be sicker!! You have a great way of stringing along phrases. Some parts of this almost sounded like a rap. Very cool. Very cool indeed. You have a twisted mind.

oh, very angry... i love it. Like those classic horror movies... virgins live, ** die! ~runs after prostitute with knife~ hey... that reminds me of Jack the Ripper... eh, I'm beginning to ramble. Anyways. nice job :) Once again i am amazed ~bows~

wowzers. Your writing style is screaming "morbid" out the wazoo. The rythym is awesome though... i guess its just a matter of taste.

That a very powerful piece of writing.
I would love to know what inspired such a hate-filled rage, because I suspect that it is not exactly autobiographical.

this really isn't a review. um, why did I read from the horror section? I wanted to show it to my friend, she likes horror stuff and wanted me 2 find a story 4 her 2 read ...you're right i'm odd :-) thanks alot for the review on my poem!

This poem is practically word for word a song I'm writing about getting a divorce because of a cheating husband. Unfortunately, I fail to give it real emotion like written in this poem. It shows that girls have murderous urges too! There are times when we want to violently kill even our closest friends, and when husbands should watch their actions.

I thought this was *amazing*. I must say, if it weren't for your unique summary, i wouldn't have bothered to investigate by reading it. That's a star for you right off: most people (myself included) can't write summaries worth anything. Even if the summary was the first line from your poem, it was deftly chosen. A lot of lines from this poem would have made good blurbs, in my opinion; the entire poem would be intriguing. The vicious imagery gives the poem impact, but what gives it even more impact is the rhyme and rhythm's interplay. It lilts with a tintinnibulation that would make Poe proud. in short, it took my breath away.
::left breathless::
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Wow. I love the first stanza, especially the first two lines. But the line "of every single baby you won't squeeze from out your **" kind of threw me off - maybe take out the word "from" or "out," it seems a little wordy.
*applauds*

One of the creepiest things I've ever read, and yet it was worth it. You conveyed the emotions of anger, hate, and betrayal so vibrantly. Your last two lines are spectacular. You definitely reached me. Finally, a good poem on FictionPress.