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| Joey7691 2004-05-16 ch 1,  | abusenice...really, really great. it is different to the other poems of yours that i have read but i still loved it to death. once again...I LOVED 'I' and this one almost matches it. almost, but not quite. 'I' was unbelievable, 'book' was amazing and 'arrogance' was great. love your writing. |
| Old Poems 2004-03-10 ch 1, | abuseThis sounds like something a highschool cheerleader would say lol but a VERY good poem, I really liked how you made it all come together! |
| jevn 2004-02-01 ch 1, | abuseThis was pretty funny. If you wanted to rhyme the hole way thrue its a bit off. I liked it. |
| Angelina Madeline Hidalgo 2004-01-29 ch 1, | abusewow, you think a lot like me. i can't stand arrogant people. it's very well-put. great work. |
| chocolatecreme06 2003-12-21 ch 1, | abuseLoL. very funny i think its a great person and really does capture the thought of an arrogant person (not that i would know of course,...at least i hope not.) Neways thanks for the review! Ciao ~Chocolatecreme06 |
| trinity-fire 2003-12-16 ch 1, | abusehahahahahaha that was funny as hell, |
| Baka B.M 2003-12-14 ch 1, | abuseI would just like to thank you for writing this poem about me... *sighs* I know my perfection is hard to put into words, but I think you did an okay job... ^^' I like the poem, it's a shame there are actually people out there who think like that. It's good to hear what we're actually thinking, and funny too! If anything, the last line seems a bit 'off,' I don't know if anyone else has noticed this, or if it's just me, but it didn't seem to flow as nicely. Overall it's a funny and truth-filled poem ^^ Well done! B.M. [I am one with my duality] Thanks for reviewing 'Virgins' ^^ |
| justin 2003-12-13 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was the best poem in the world another blossom of love has unfurled |