That's so dark... It's hopeful, but it's sad too...

thank you for the review! it made my day!
anwayz, i was drawn to this fic and i like it a lot. it is so sad, really out there. you manage to inject emotion into your words which make it a good ss.way to go!

Overall, it's awesome. There's no real clear cut imagery, but I think that's what makes it so great, because it leaves it up to the imagination to work it out... I hope that makes sense. :)

i really enjoyed it. awesome job!

Absolutely adored the images that this brought into mind. Realistic, throbbing with the sounds of the soul... I especially liked the line "apart of me dies every chance it gets."
All in all, I enjoyed it very much, and it was--in my eye--quite well written, aside from perhaps a couple of grammatical things. But, yes, very nice... Now I shall have to read more, hrm.

Your writing is so compelling, it's really beautiful.