wow, another deliciously sounding poem with that snowberry poison...very good job..

truly yours...

i have yet to figure out the meaning of the word "haiku"...but i really, really loved your poem...excellent job!!

i liked the bit: "snowberry poison".

"snowberry poison"...i liked this image alot...i'm into poison imagery also

Oh, wow. Delightful to analyze, this.

AWESOME

Cool I like that one!

oh...I like.
the wording is beautiful and unusual.
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you like Red Hot Chili Peppers too!? you cool^_~

*sigh* how perfectly perfect...only you could both conjure an image of a quiet winter suicide and make it seem somehow beautiful...drops of red on white...
~lyv

nice piece. dark and angsty, vivid imagery and good use of metaphor. i like this. great job!

This is amazing. The type of haiku I aspire to.
-Jessica

Interesting piece. Captures the spirit of haiku very well, I think. Both playful and painful.
Thanks for the review!

The image and the use of the color white gives me chills.
~Heart of the Sword

Again, a great way of expressing yourself. This seems like it has so much behind it. It goes straight to my sub-concious!

beautiful. just beautiful.