Some parts of this story confuse the Hell out of me. Though I totally am enraptured by it. It's a good story, good concept -- great writing. I feel like Nova switches her personalitya little bit between the first and second chapters. And did Tom's name change? Wasn't it Jack? I feel like Nova allows herself to get close to them all too quickly. I can understand about Tom, if he's Passion (which would be why she "couldn't help it" when he first came into her room) ... but other than her initial attraction to Tristan ... I don't know. I feel like I've missed something, and that something is terribly important. Anyway, keep writing, I look forward to what else comes of this. A rare find on Fiction Press, let me tell you.

I like this alot, and I can't wait to see where this plot ends up going (whatever the plot is...lol). I am officially intrigued, and hope to see an update really soon. Till then, Ja.

what on earth is the ppl in black all about
i liked it#
it was good but u keep on changing from style to sty which is not so good
all the surreal stuff and the aida dripping sarcasm were good but not the coments like 'what the hell?' and it seems really weird doing the slashy thing(/) between wordsd
but otherwise it was really good
all the suspense n stuff
wanted me to read on
the whole 'way too cold for words' is so my thing. i used it my fic
lol
yelena