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| a silenced revolution 2007-03-28 ch 1,  | abuseReally interesting. I can see why it's your favorite poem :) |
| KIFFRYN 2006-05-29 ch 1, | abuseWow thats creepy but in a good way. I can see why it's your favourite |
| AnotherFace 2005-08-12 ch 1, | abuseawesome. I can see why this is your favorite. :) |
| Stefan Vorell 2005-05-26 ch 1, | abuseInteresting concept, the end made me smile. I could just imagine a vampire hissing at sunlight. (Not implying anything, just a funny image I got in my head) |
| silkydaydreams 2005-04-23 ch 1, anon. | abusevery cool man. Way far out...have you ever tried just looking at a black light...pure psychadelicness. Keep up the fresh poems |
| citrus scented 2005-04-22 ch 1, | abuseoh chilling stuff; really great. thats such a horrible thought though. |
| another randomnobody 2005-04-22 ch 1, | abusegreat poem i loved the imagery and the last line thanks for the review on my war poe,^-^ |
| Adonia Chesser 2005-04-16 ch 1, | abuseHey, such a diffrent poem. |
| Shadow of Silver 2005-04-05 ch 1, | abuseThis poem's alright. I noticed only one problem: "...I feel frighten, when I realize...", I think it should be 'frightened', yes? Otherwise, it's so-so. [~Shadow of Silver~] |
| LauraKM 2005-04-05 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant, i really really like this, the idea is really clever. |
| Sunami Silverblade 2005-04-03 ch 1, | abuseHmm... claustrophobic, maybe? The room seems like the way a lot of people perceive "death." The Afterlife. But that's just what this poem made me think of. Intriguing. ^_^ Love the imagery. Good job. --Sunami |
| youzi 2005-04-03 ch 1, | abuseYikes!that's scary...hope this makes the 100th review =D |
| THROUGHTHESEEYES 2005-04-02 ch 1, | abuseReminds me of a nightmare. Good one.And I think you get the FP award for poem-with-the-most--reviews! |
| Mlle. Daae 2005-04-01 ch 1, | abuseThanks for the review! This was an awesome poem! *eyes bug out as I observe the number of reviews* Nice job, keep writing! ~Mlle. Daae |
| Written 2005-03-31 ch 1, | abusevery cool. i especially love the last line, as well as the one about stars. awesome job! |