*gasp* PLEASE keep on writing, this story is WAY too good to pass by! You must continue, you've done such a great job so far!I've got to find out what happens next!

Aww...i really like Starke Klaue, he seems sweet...for a dinosaur XD I really like your story, its really unique n your writing style is groovy! Please continue it, i wanna know whats happened!

Wow...they were shocked that badly? Hard to imagine a Velociraptor actually vomiting at the sight of stuff...

Schlitzer's really in a tight spot now..hmm...how does one pull through when you don't know who might be your enemy?

Hmm..seems you have a few formatting problems towards the bottom of the page.

Hmm, looking good!
They'll start fighting with each other soon i guess.

lol...great story...I like your writing. There haven't been that many dino related stories on the this site and this is the first one I've read. Keep it up. XD

Hm..quite a lot of conflict going on in the pack.

Haven't seen too much about dinos lately, but this one's definitely good!
The Raptor pack catches my interest quite a bit too.