This is pretty good. I have to say that the rhyming seemed a little forced at times, though. I used to do the same thing, but then I realized that poetry doesn't have to rhyme... Just write from your heart and it will find its oun rhythm.

Yeak! Chill bumps i love this poem, it is so wonderful! This is why i tell you you are a great poet, I can't believe you say things like you fail at everything b/c you don't i love your stuff!

I admire this poem. You do not suck as a writer. Keep working and writing. I know what it is like to be lonely... but now I don't feel many feelings anyomore...

Hmm. If this is based on true emotions and such, you did a great job. A truly poetic apology.

I hate it when people say they have no talent when they obviously do. Boy, can you write! For something so personal, a person ignorant of the situation can still be swept away by your words and their emotion. I can't wait to read more.

I told you. It's not your fault Susie. If it's anyone, it's mine!