Hey, love it, but it kinda bugs me how much Shin and Kei changed personalities.
They're like the EXACT opposite of what you gave me the impression they were going to be.

I love this story. Its so kawaii.

After reading Lilias story it was recommended to read yours and i have to say I love it. I was a bit confused in the beginning, but I can't wait to read more. I think you gave Shin a cool name. In one of my own stories I have a character named Shin, but he's an angel. Anyway I loved the story and can't wait to read more.

*glomp* =^_^= Heyla. Great chapter, though I'm afraid I can't remember the specific things I wanted to mention since I read it a little while ago. I love Shin's narrative--it's very amusing. :3 And Keiji is adorable--gotta love the interaction between them, especially with the telepathy aspect thrown in. *cackles* I look forward to seeing how their mission goes .. and how they manage traveling together. XD
Hope you'll update soon, though I know you have a bunch of other stuff to get to first, so don't overwork yourself!
Luv,
Lils

Hmm...I think I must have read the this story before because the first chapter seemed so familiar. However I guess i forgot about it, but I'm glad that I rediscovered this story. Its lovely and really written very well. Thanks for continuing the story and I can't wait for the next chapter!!

Very well written. I want to read it more but I have to go. I'll read more of it later and leave a more detailed review.

Wow! Beautiful story...I love the way you describe things...you have amazing talent. Keep up the good work! Update soon!
Kazui-Tenshi
PS Can you please review my story too? Thanks ^__^

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*earpiercing squeal* Wai! ... o.O Okay, feel better now. ^_~
Sorry it took me so long to review--things have been insanely busy. I read the chap yesterday and I have very little time to write this, so my review probably won't be as detailed as usual. Yesh, loveliness. I like where this is going, even if the shounen ai isn't immediate. ^^ By the way:
" He’s so vulnerable at the moment. I wonder what would happen if I kiss him… "
Go for it! *cheers, roots* XD Hehe
Yesh, well. ^^; The scene between Keiji and the narrator was very nice--dramatic without being overly so this early. Keiji sure is interesting. *ponders* Oh, the het couple actually didn't bug me, though fluffy het romances usually do. Special. ^^ And Kasen kicks, man. XD I can definitely see something between him and Dokai, too.
Anyway, must wrap up. They're parters! *grins evilly* I can't wait to see what happens next! Update when you can. ^^
Glomps,
Lilias

Great chapter! I await the next one!

*Drools* It... like... coolness... and... woah...
hehe! Lilias refered your story to me so I decided "Why not?". All I can say is... E E E K! YAYISHNESS! I was like, SO hooked after the first few lines! ^.^ The main guy is cool! and he's really deep to! Seriously, it was hard for me not to cry! ^.~
The Assassin was so funny to! Hehe! ehehe... Wrinkly... ehehe...
Total Glomps on your story, and I hope you update soon! I think this is going to as big of an obsession of mine as Lilias' Spontaniety! Lol.
Many Glomps
Neko Girl

Oh my freaking god. o.o I didn't think it could possibly get -better-! *glomps* Holy shiznitz, girl, this is great! *breathes* Okay, must form coherent statements ...
Firstly, I loved how you began the story. The very first sentence intrigued me, and by the time I started the third paragraph I was hooked. The sakura trees made the scene absolutely beautiful, and Keiji was so cute! The style of the first person narrative was cool, too--kind of backwards speaking, which made it sounds more ... mm, unearthly, I suppose.
Hehe, I love the personality that developed for the narrator. And the assassin opening was just awesome. I actually really like the new story line, even though I liked the other one too, and you've got a nice solid history to back it up. ^_^ Hee, and I loved how he managed to bungle the break-in and still get to his target, only to be foiled. XD I do see the appearance of several familiar names, by the way. *grins*
Lastly, nu you ended it there! *dies* I loved the appearance of Keiji, but now I'm like ... but, what happens? *twitch* Must know. You'll update soon, won't you?
Aww, thanks, luv you too! *glomp* ^^ Update soon, please! *puppy dog eyes*
Hugs and candycanes,
Lils

O! I like this, yes, I do! I almost thought that for a minute there, the second part of the story of the assassin was the guy...but then I thought, "naw, he seems too strange." Then again I noticed the blonde-haired person... Now I'm confused... Hee. He seems to have gone mad... or maybe I have.
Your story is intoxicating... you've altogether made it impossible for me to wait to read more. But I'll come back to see if you're written!!
-Darker Angel

*Very* nice. Breathless at times, but in a good way. Looking forward to the next chapter.