AW! OMG, this is AWESOME! Very good job with the writing as well. ^_^ Keep up the good work.
Always,
SoccerStar04

Moving poem. Having someone there with you to brush away your tears and say everything is okay. There are few of those people out there.
Question.. not flame: Does everything you write about have to do with cutting? I'm just curious. After reading Suicidal Treatment, I saw a different view on my own writings. Mine seem all happy and bliss, with maybe two or three exceptions. Yes, I make poor atempts to write not so cheery stuff-- but it never works out. You've got a talent in writing, and you're using it well. Man, I sound like I'm an old English teacher. *dies of her oldness*
Regina O.B.

Quote: "You saved me and I place the blade back into the drawer" (Daimon Minerva)
That's good use of irony there! The end turned out different then what I thought it would. I like this one, even though the guy you talk about is a jerk!! (Yay! 2 out of ## stories finished!)

that was a awesome poem! the ending was good, it made the whole thing come together very surprising

omg. this rocked! i didnt get that u were talking about a blade.. until the end. it is a blade, right? ::looks confused:: but it was awesome! >.<
~scars~

Good poem. Nice metaphors. The feelings are very really, and you describe them perfectly!

good twist at the end.
i wonder why so many poems by girls about boys/men always seem to portray the man as some larger-than-life savior or hero while the girl is usually some distressed person in need of the man.
i'm not criticizing this poem in particular or anything...