That's really morbid.. Augh, I'm going to have nightmares tonight. But I loved it. I really did. Honestly. And truly. I loved it. (I still have shivers down my spine!)

wow... that was wierd

One website: rotten.com! It's the only place that I know on the web that you can see ACTUAL dead bodies and horrifying ends. I never really liked the website that much (except for its archive of wide and interesting history, which is actually, very theoral) but one of my favorite pictures was this 90-something-year-old man who somehow accidently boiled himself in a soupy mix. I don't suggest LOOKING at the picture, it's very awful. A police officer took the photos of the man (or what was left of him) and it was said his remains were in the tub for over two weeks. The police officers who tried to remove the body said that as soon as they grabbed his legs, the meat and muscles just SLID off. It's so disturbing!

This story reminds me EXACTLY of that. I'm not sure how the baby would go mushy exactly (I'm into chemistry, ignore me) but this was very unique. It reminds me of Bentley Little and it was well done. Congratulations.

Creepy! Makesme think of the Wifes of Stepford gone horribly, horribly wrong... Well written!
The only thing i would change is here:
"David took a step back, but his butt hit the edge of the stove, which was still hot, and so he instinctively jumped a few inches forward."
As the action is quite quick-paced, I would break this up into a few shorter sentences. Maybe something along the lines of:
David took a step back, his butt hitting the edge of the stove. The residual heat made him instinctively jump a few inches forward.
Just a friendly suggestion! -:^)
=kat=

Oh...my...God. I don't know what to say. The whole time I was reading that, my jaw was on the floor. CREEPY! Wonderfully written though. I like it.

Very disturbing, but cool. Great work in describing the head and I loved the title. Nice work, keep writing.
**Slave**

"I loved him almost as much as I love you." THAT, my friend, is a very creepy line. Nice hint of foreshadowing, I liked it. You end this story with a cliff hanger, but we can KIND OF guess what happens... But...is the casserole made from the baby's body or something totally different?
The story's written in very blunt, straight-foward style, which I imagine is how someone in shock might view the world at that moment.
Izzy J.

ew... well written, but.. ew... :P *applauds raucously* I'm sure this was the reaction you were going for. ("ew..") great work. :)

I adore this! Grotesque and vaguely uncomfortable as to rouse little nervous giggles. Please continue!

ah... That was the creepiest thing I've ever read... ~shudder~ I applaud you for your rare gift...

What the HELL is up with you and cannibalism??
Just, you know, curious.
Anyway.
Good story.

That's the most disturbing thing I've read in a while. In a good way.

'horror' is right.
Possibly the most disturbing thing you've written...It's very well written, but I can't say I really like it.

dear god... it's well written, but damn... huh, well whatever puts the hump on your twinkie.

That was certainly interesting! Extremely gross, yes, but if you gross people out it must mean you're a good horror writer. Fabulous work! (What was the pun with the title?)
=Trinn the Omnipotent=