I love it! Love it!! Wonderful mix of second and third person, so real, so believable. Beautiful.
~Sasa

Yay! I love happiness! Hehehe! :)

I really like your writing, I mean, it's poetic sounding and you always choose the right word. The story is short, but it's so much better this way, than like most stories where it takes chapters. The characters have no names or descriptions, but yet they are characterized so well. Well done ^^
xMegan

how cute! that's all i need to say! =)

So sweet! That's the best word I can come up with. I've never read a sweeter story before. Seriously. Good job on this one!

I like the way its written, I've never really read a story written exactly in that sort of style and I just loved it.
So awesome story!!

short sweet and to th point. i loved it. im new to fp and slash and i like what i see i would like to know what you think of some of my stuff.
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