I think in your wonderful haste to put chapter up you forgot to put one in... I came to this reasoning when I didnt why Aidan was on a horse and at the top where it says Chapter 3 instead of Chapter 2... but either way this story is seeming to be sound. Got some mystering into it...
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Now where did this here story come from? So far so good, a lot of elemental stories end up in blah land, but I am sure you will do just find. I cant wait to see where this goes.
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Whoa, what's going to happen to Aidan? Poor little fella, but a journey is never easy. Your writing is improving, but it still lacks description. If you add more description to the setting, it'll be better! Good luck! I'll be cheering for you! ^_^
--"No one can truly determine the outcome of an action, not even the one who guards Time." ~Jruceques, from my story Shadow Claw (Unknown Chapter)--

Hm...the chapters are a little short but I still really like this story :)

You seem to have improved on your writing, but more description will do the trick! Yes, a bit of description is important but of course, don't go overboard and write three whole pages on Aidan falling off the horse! Whoa, don't get angry, I was just kidding... =P
--"No one can truly determine the outcome of an action, not even the one who guards Time." ~Jruceques, from my story Shadow Claw (Unknown Chapter)--

Quite an okay story with okay description, I'd say. I don't think I saw any grammar/spelling mistakes, but I might be blind in the first place. =P
Anyway, you'll improve with more practice! Good luck! I'll be cheering for you! ^_~
--"No one can truly determine the outcome of an action, not even the one who guards Time." ~Jruceques, from my story Shadow Claw (Unknown Chapter)--

Wo, this seems very interesting :) Can't wait for more of the story to be posted up!