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| Needa S 2005-04-26 ch 1,  | abuselol Awesome description of fishing. It's my favorite sport. Hey, maybe ya would like to join my site too. Its a fun clean site with other Authors from here. I will send ya an invite. By all means keep on writing. |
| LauraKM 2005-04-06 ch 1, | abuseHe he, very good, liked this. In response to your reveiw, i intended people to think that '27 different sorts' was about finding sombody to be with, how its all chance, however i don't believe this so it's actually about Bread. I was in france at the time and doing work experience in a french bakery and struggling with all the different words they have for different breads. It's a private joke because when i wrote it i'd just split up with sombody so everybody was expecting heartbreak poems! It amused me the power of preconseption, the fact that everybody who knows me read it as a synical relationship poem and everyone who dosn't takes it more lierally. Wow thats a long reveiw, great poem, very funny. |
| Cry Tears of Darkness 2005-04-04 ch 1, | abuseheh! cute cute, very nice! i like it. makes me smile |
| THROUGHTHESEEYES 2005-04-02 ch 1, | abuseLove it. You can follow a fisherman's thinking and line of reasoning from start to finish. Taking your time is important to catching some fish! |
| Thyrt 2005-03-03 ch 1, | abusewoo!! i love to fish, i have a pond in my back yard:D glad ya caught it! |
| Joey7691 2005-03-01 ch 1, | abuseSimple, but true. Never been fishing myself...but I'd like to try it. |
| Charisma101 2005-02-12 ch 1, | abusereminds me of the card game "Go fish" cause when u get the card u asked for.. we usually say fish my wish lol nice job |
| Minus the Bear 2005-01-15 ch 1, | abuseHeh. Short, but kind of neat. Random, but hey! I love random. Nice, nice short poem. |
| Amythist Rose Gebhart 2005-01-08 ch 1, | abuseI like how it tells a story. It makes you think that your the one fishing. |
| jmcqk6 2005-01-07 ch 1, | abuselol this is funny! I really liked it |
| Lives Backstage 2004-01-18 ch 1, | abusei can't fish to save my life. you've got lots more luck than i do! |
| Siberia1 2004-01-07 ch 1, | abuseI wouldn't say it was humourous, but it was definitely an adorable piece. |
| maniacal vampiress 2003-12-21 ch 1, | abusei dont like this poem cuz i dont like fishing, haha, but i must say, you are quite good at the whole rhyming thing. when some people write rhyming poems, they end up garbled and they dont flow together very well cuz they try too hard to find something that rhymes, and the trasition sucks, but you have talent...keep it up *jules* |
| Sekon 2003-12-19 ch 1, | abuseInspirational, i never catch fish anymore. But it had a good climax! |
| LostMoon 2003-12-18 ch 1, | abuse*not good at fishing* yay you got a fish! did you eat it? o.O cute poem. |