This is a wonderfully beautiful and moving poem! You should be proud. I love the last two lines; they are my favorite. The imagery is also excellent. As you read the poem you get this terribly clear picture of 'Hope'. There are only two minor errors that I can see. In line four, where you say "it speaks not and it’s life is kept" there should be no apostrophe in the "its". It's the same thing in line six. However, those are very correctable mistakes. All in all this is a wonderful poem. Great work!

Very sad. Strangly enough, inspiring also. Had thing to do, put those two things together, but this poem does that with grace. Good job
Valerie

GASP! Definately a fave. I didn't expect the 'it' to be Hope! Wow.

This is a wonderful poem. It's one hundred percent true.

nice one. i like how you made hope seem as a person... can't really explain but nice job.
DDT

I liked it very much. I liked the randomness to it. Very nice.
Raye

I like the way the reader doesnt know who or what you are talking about untill the end of the poem. It kept me intrested and the imagery was quite graphic.

I like it!

oh wow, so sad. the texture so delicate...so fagile. so beautiful, great work! kudos!

*lacrimo* this is... really good. _