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| scorchingray 2005-01-26 ch 4,   | i like it alot. im really looking forward to reading more. keep on writing!! |
| Quoven 2004-07-02 ch 4, | I like this story quite a bit. I hope that you continue to update it. |
| The Zaniak 2004-01-27 ch 4, | Hey, it stopped! Put more up! I want to read what happened next...I'm really quite enjoying this story, in case you couldn't tell. |
| The Zaniak 2004-01-27 ch 3, | I shall ignore you, then. And I'm still enjoying the story. I just worked out that this is true (well, so you claim...) It seems so...fictional for some reason. |
| The Zaniak 2004-01-27 ch 2, | Well, I'm enjoying this so far. You have a very..."fun" style of writing. Sorry if that doesn't explain much. |
| amazonwitchqueen 2004-01-12 ch 4, | hey this is a really good story, you should update soon. i want to find out what happens, the characters are really intriguing. |
| Gezi 2003-12-21 ch 4, | Maybe you should have spent more time on this chapter. It really wasn't up to par. |
| Gezi 2003-12-20 ch 3, | AH! NEED MORE! NOW! |
| acidicrodent 2003-12-17 ch 3, | hey, not bad, not bad..it would be intresting to read more... |
| Not so Average 2003-12-16 ch 3, | Really interesting and extremely well-written. Your story proves you have talent. I really really like this. |
| Papillon Sierra 2003-12-16 ch 3, | hmm... it's okay... i dunno... brittni and family are freaks hee hee |
| Pink Umbrella 182 2003-12-16 ch 3, | Omg...this is sort of a sad story!! so update soon :) |
| Raven Silverhawk 2003-12-16 ch 3, | Great story so far! Wow... a lot can happen in two years, eh? Anyway, I hope I didn't offend you about the age difference thing, it's just that it's not so much of a far jump from my perspective because my parents are 11 years apart (47 & 58 and have been happily married for over 20 years, I might add ^_^) so yeah. Anyway... I don't know if you notice this, but your second chapter has some of your first in the beginning. Bye! I can't wait for more! ^__^ |
| Raven Silverhawk 2003-12-16 ch 2, | OOh, I like! ^^ I can't wait to read more... (it seems like that's all I'm saying, doesn't it? LoL). You're a talented writer. ^_~ |
| Papillon Sierra 2003-12-15 ch 2, | hmm... can't wait to see what happens. i love your characters! |