One word: Powerful.
Keep it up!
~The One and Only

this is a good poem i'm confused but i never really got into poems until now

THat is so sad, i can just feel the emotions radiating of the page, I realy know how this feels and it freaking sucks.

wow...that person must have been a jerk. or something...friends...weirdos...i hate it when they lie to you...it hurts..i know how you feel i have the same problem with a guy...^_^
Kt

liked the italics/normal thing, like you were travelling between diffrent voies. nice poem, but didn't give you many images.