This is beautiful.Thank you for writing it.

Really liked it (and I'm a girl, by the way). And, umm, I can also relate to these things 'cause I also view one of my friends like that...and she acts like an annoying-but-fun mom to me, LOL! Anyway, about your story:

Man, I can't believe that you actually thought that people would send you flames for this one! I think that this story is very sweet. The message is very sincere about your love for your best-friend...

*sigh* I can relate to whatever your saying... It's really hard to hide your feelings from someone. *sigh*

I am very confused. Was it another girl or guy asking our your dream girl?
I can relate to your story. I have recently confessed to myself that I am in love with a friend of mine. She sees me exactly as your girl sees you, as an older, protective sister. She is sweet, beautiful, charasmatic, and just... wonderful.
And confusing. She and I flirt a lot, we talk about when we marry each other how we are going to adopt. She always is teasing my boyfriend about how I love her more. Though she is very nice, she talks to me like she wants to be with me.
I went to her house yesterday and she purposfully moved about to get me to check her out and admitted it. She tells me how she is attracted to me and she always tells me she loves me.
But I think it is just because she is getting over her ex-boyfriend who she has been in love with since she was in the sixth grade.
Any advice? Please reply

*sniff* I know how you feel. My friend is going on a date with a friend I introduced her too and he's a nice guy, but I wish I was him. But I want her to be happy, so yeah I'm all for her going out with him. And yes he knows I will destroy him if he hurts her. They both think its protectiveness and you are right its jealousy. But I'm not going to tell her. This is a great read.

this is very beautiful. this really makes me think about that girl too...

This is so depressing. I want to give you a hug! I want to help you and tell her myself! ;_; How hard that must be to go day in and day out feeling this way. If something doesn't change, you'll go insane!

Wow. This is stirring up lots of familiar feelings for me; I used to be in love with one of my two best friends too. You really captured the worst part (not being able to tell her) nicely. But at least your friend is bisexual; at least you've got a shot. Mine was as straight as they come (it was all "Oh my God, he's so hot" and "Oh my God, he's so sexy"), and just to make it worse, really, really Christian, and thinks gays and lesbians are, in her own words, "disgusting". Ah, the cruel mistress of irony, she keeps screwing me over. Anyway, enough about me; your story was very heartfelt and well-written. Good luck to you and this girl, hopefully she will return your feelings.

That was so beautiful... and I know exactly what you're going through. It ain't the greatest thing in the world, eh?

omaigad... it's so sad, and amazingly beautiful. I used to like my best friend, and well... things were different. but now we're still best friends, and i don't like her that way. it's okay... i find it cute, and the last line's SO true. whoever flames this is bloody well blind! support to you!

beautiful work... um, although i havn't been in a situation such as this before, i believe that if you told her she wouldn't leave you as a friend, and she might even love you back... well, bye now... love to all ^ ^
~Ed... (my name is really marley, i play neopets too, my sign-in is marley723 i'd like it if you could neomail me)

No flames from me. After all I wouldn't do that 'cause I myself am a lesbian. That was beatiful. Absolutely beautiful.
I know how you feel. I too long for someone I'll probably never have.

So so so not going to flame you. I have the same problem, albeit with a guy. Unrequited love is a universal theme. It affects gays and straights alike, so I don't see how anyone can flame you.

No flames from this lesbian, I would hope. Wow, no flames at all...
As everyone else has said, beautiful. I love it... it takes a lot for me to be touched, because a lot of the time I'm emotionless...but this has really moved me. Thanks for sharing. ^^
-Shadow

That is...absolutely beautiful. I know I can't say anything that hasn't been said already, but I just couldn't help but tell you how much this moved me. It's truly touching, and not many writers can do that to a person. I used to be against homosexuality, but after reading this, all my doubts as to the fact that shoujo-ai or shounen-ai are as true and pure as love between two people of opposite genders have been erased. I agree that you should probably tell her, because I don't think any good friend would cut off the friendship because of something like this. Oh, btw, this is _twilight_rose_ from neopets, feel free to neomail me if you want.