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| jekodama 2007-07-04 ch 1, | abuseI don't know why, but this piece disturbs me to no end. It makes me think about the death that lingers on all of our heads, waiting for the moment in which her scythe will reap them. Disturbing. |
| unrequited 2006-07-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseI hope you know where that poem comes from. it was supposed to be during the black pest or something like that in England or Europe. rinn around the rosy is the marks the illness would leave on you, it would make circle scars. ashes, ashes they all fall down are the ashes of the dead falling down from the chimneys or the crematory places. i think that they burnes the odies so it wouldn't infect others or something. i found out about it in one of my bio books. it's a very morbid nursery. |
| CeeKay Sheppard 2005-06-22 ch 1, | abuseHmm, very Twilight Zone. I like it; the writing is very good. |
| erpkewotjewt 2004-08-08 ch 1, | abuseWow! I love the final line... Never thought to do it like that... |