 Mélee 2004-05-03 . chapter 1 Way awsome! Keep it up^.^ |
 Ryuujin Tamashii 2003-12-20 . chapter 1^^ It's really good. I never thought I would read a romance...but since u made me... Lol j/p! It is really good..but I feel bad for the canvas...what a waste. AAh well though. Update soon k? |
 Da-c0nfu53d-1 2003-12-17 . chapter 1I loved the story. The fact that Tori's a mute, really interested me. I have a character and she's deaf, but I haven't written anything with her in it yet. Any way, please continue soon. I can't wait to find out what happens! |
 RJOTweet 2003-12-16 . chapter 1Me here. Once again I love your story Emile. Keep up the fantastic work! See you in class. |
 justanotherromantic 2003-12-16 . chapter 1hey, this is a really great story. i love the plot and your idea on making her mute made it even better. i hope you update soon, cuz i can't wait to read more! |
 jrkbrk 2003-12-16 . chapter 1hey, you have a great story and i like the plot. You also have a very orignal idea about tori being a mute. i hope you update soon and continue with the story.
jrkbrk |
 jenne 2003-12-16 . chapter 1 this sounds really cute you know? my sister is a mute and she has a hard time being accepted in school. she likes your story alot!
please keep writing! it makes her happier:) |
 vanderhall 2003-12-15 . chapter 1This is amazing. Tori's character is wonderfully developed, your descriptions are beautiful and it really shows what it might be like to lack the ability to speak. You're a great writer and I can't wait to read more of this! ~VDH |