Oh, I really like this poem. I knew that I'd find something good if I searched for angsty love poems...>:-) can you tell that I'm in a very bitter-sweet mood right now?
Anyway, I really think this does a good job at expressing how love can hold a person down, allow then to be abused, and they won't care, because it's love.
That is what your trying to expepress here, isn't it? I'm a decent poet myself, but when it comes to interpreting other poeples work, I'm usually lost. ^_^
Either way, a honestly enjoyed reading it, and I think that you are a great poet! Keep up the good work!
~Veromorphia (vare-oh-more-fee-ah) sorry. ^_^ Had to make sure that you could pronounce my name.